100 Word Challenge – Person Walking Through Wall

it was a clear night, my light was on and I was playing a game on my XBOX 360, when I heard a knock on my door. Knock! I was freaking out. KNOCK!

The knocking stopped, but then I saw something, my wall was moving. “Mum! Call pest control!” No answer…

Then I saw that the moving shape on the wall was, a person! I screamed, throwing my controller at the wall. Two ghostly figures appeared.  “What do you want?” I asked in a shaky voice.

‘I want… I want… a sandwich.” They said. “A chicken and lettuce one please.”

One thought on “100 Word Challenge – Person Walking Through Wall

  1. Hi Estella
    When I readed your text it had punches of comedy in it like at the end the line was hilarious you would expect something like I want your soul but instead it was ‘I want… I want… a sandwich.” “A chicken and lettuce one please.” One thing you could improve on would be your adding a capital at the start, other then that it was amazing

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