I walked along the long winding path I live on. The summer breeze blowing my hair around. I saw people as they watered their plants as I walked by. Soon I came to my friend’s house.
“Hi Scarlet!” She said joyfully. “Come in! I’m just finishing practising my violin!”
My friend grabbed a pillow from her bed for me to sit on. It was annoying to have to wait to talk because of her violin practise, although I don’t mind.
Finally, she finished.
“How have you been lately?” I asked curiously.
“Well I did do…
Great story. The prompts fitted in nicely and smoothly with the story. Leaves the reader wondering what will happen next.
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Very good Job Estella.
I really though it was very clever to put scarlet as a name.
great work.
Finn