100 Word Challenge – …so what lies ahead of…

Rose and I walked down the long winding hiking path, gazing over at the bright green hills and blue sky.

“Thanks for persuading me to do this.” I said as I pulled out my lunchbox and took a bite of sandwich. “The school will be talking about this for months.”

The view started to disappear as we entered the forest. We soon came to a fork in the path.

So, what lies ahead of the paths?” I asked our guide, who was looking at the map.

“I- “she began. “I-I don’t know where we even are!”

2 thoughts on “100 Word Challenge – …so what lies ahead of…

  1. Well done Estella, this is a great story.
    You have done a great job with the prompt. I really like how you described the scenery in your opening line. You draw the reader into your story.
    Your use of dialogue is excellent and the ending leaves me wanting to read more.
    Great work!
    Ms Brennock
    Team 100 w/c
    Dublin
    Irealnd

  2. Goodness, Estella, this is very exciting. What will they do if the guide doesn’t know where they are? There could be an adventure ahead.

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