100 Word Challenge – …Although they ran quickly, they weren’t making enough progress…

This is about two friends who need to make it to school on time.

The girls decided to run to school. Although they ran quickly, they still weren’t making enough progress.

They turned the corner, and to  their surprise, 2 rental bikes were just sitting there! (Well, maybe they were rentals they were not sure.)

The two hopped on the bikes and rode as fast as they could.

They could see their school in the distance!!! Though to get there, they had to ride down Break Neck Hill.

They peddled up to the edge and zoomed down. They made it in time! Though they now wished bikes had airbags.

 

 

3 thoughts on “100 Word Challenge – …Although they ran quickly, they weren’t making enough progress…

  1. Ha. I REALLY like the ending. It implies allot >”< :O) . I like that you added some humour. I like the rest of it too, but I think you should slow it down a bit. Linger on things more, and maybe add some more detail. I loved it. Keep up da good work.
    -Emily

  2. Hi, my name is Pierre.
    * Your story was interesting.
    * You had good adjectives.
    Wish: You could have used better words.
    But overall your story was great.

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