100 Word Challenge – However, She Couldn’t Believe What She Had Done

She was told that the students would praise her. She was told there would be no consequences. She was told she would never be an outcast again, however, she couldn’t believe what she had done just a few moments ago. A tear dropped onto her flashing phone screen. Then another. Then another. She gripped it tightly, wishing she could erase the event from history. She should never have listened to them; of course, it was a trick, nobody would ever accept her, She would never be popular.  She looked back at her phone. I am such a fool…

One thought on “100 Word Challenge – However, She Couldn’t Believe What She Had Done

  1. I really like your story and I found it interesting. I could really see in my mind the part where you said one tear then another.
    You were also able to make me feel sorry for the person. I really connected with the writing. Thank you

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    Fairfield Intermediate
    New Zealand

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